Greek/Egyptian/Norse Demigod Form:

Name:Drake Blane
Age:16
Gender:Male
Eyes:Grey
Hair:Black
Height:6'2
Body Type:Muscular
Skin Color:White
God Parent:Thanatos
Mortal Parent:Lily Blane
Country of Origin:North America
Pets:A raven named Pitch
Talents:Experienced sword fighter, Stratagist
Weapon**:Stygian Iron broadsword named Exitium Latin for destruction
Flaws:Extremely Antisocial, Depressed, Headstrong
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):Shadow travel,
Life Before CHB*:Life was difficult before Camp Half Blood. At 9 years old my mother was killed in a car crash while on her tour bus heading home. With no family to go to I was sent into a Foster Home. The family to get me were nice. They took me in when no one else would but they sensed something about me was off. After being kicked out of several schools my Foster parents decided I wasn't worth the trouble and put me back in the foster home at age 13. I ran away not two weeks after. A satyr found me huddled inside an abandoned factory which I set to be my temporary home and took me to Camp Half Blood.

RP Example*:I awoke with the moon still high. I never seemed to sleep all the way through the night. Tonight was no different. With no possible way to go back to sleep, with remnants of my most recent nightmare clinging to my mind, I decided to take a walk....
Any notes about your characters:

Nyx isn't an allowed god parent, please change it.
An RP example is like telling a story in your character's point of view. (Example: I walked into the forest, the cold night air blowing through my hair. I zipped my leather jacket up to my chin and put my hands in my pockets.)

Is this better?

How far can he shadow travel?
How many times can he shadow travel a day?
A child of Thanatos cannot bend shadows.

Shadow travel twice a day 50 miles? Extreme exhaustion. Raise the dead then?

50 miles total or 50 miles each?
Do you mean raise the dead like, bring people back to life or controlling zombies?

50 each. Controlling zombies or skeletons depending on how long certain dead has been under and what climate etc.

Okay, how many times a day can he control zombies or skeletons?
How many at a time?

5 at a time every 6 hours. Or is that too much?

That's fine.
How long do they last?
Do the skeletons reform?

2 hours. Reform unless completely disenigrated

They can't last that long.

What would be a maximum, an hour?

Like 20 minutes tops. Even that might be pushing it.

So about 15 min then. No need to stretch anything

Okay, your form looks good.
Approved.

Greek/Egyptian/Norse Demigod Form:

Name:Damon Dark
Age:15
Gender:Male
Eyes:Silver
Hair:Black
Height:Tall
Body Type:Lean
Skin Color:Pale
God Parent:ACHERON
Mortal Parent:Anne Dark
Country of Origin:U.S.A
Pets: White Wolf
Talents:Quick Thinker, Martial Arts
Weapon**:Stygian Scythe. Nox
Flaws: Self-conscious, quiet, doesn't trust easily
Powers(have to do with parent) optional: Shadow Travels twice a day 10 miles each
Life Before CHB*:Life before Camp was really depressing. Not knowing any relatives and wandering the dark streets of Manhattan. Hiding in shadowy alleys huddled around a tiny fire just for any amount of warmth. I grew up quick in those days. It was rough living off of rats and stolen food. Finally I found myself face to face with Sphinx I answered the last question wrong and was gratefully saved by a satyr who took me to a place where I felt at home, Camp Half-Blood
RP Example*: The icy wind whipped my jacket around as I trudged down the dark alleyway. A dark figure stepped out of the shadows his red eyes gleaming in the darkness, wearily I hit a button on my watch and it turned into my scythe, Nox. The man smirked "You got some spunk kid, I like that to bad this is probably the last time you draw that weapon" he said as he stepped toward me....
Any notes about your character:Extremely loyal.

Is this better? I just took out the whole Deimos thing but now I'm not sure if my power lines up?

Archeron is the underworld river of pain, so no the power doesn't line up well atleast not the fear power.

How about now?

I think 50 miles is a stretch for shadow-travelling.

And the first power... isn't really a power.

30? Yeah I thought that also but I wasn't sure

30's a stretch too. Normally 15 miles at most.