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PostSubject: Skyward Bound (Maximum Ride Fanfic)   Skyward Bound (Maximum Ride Fanfic) Icon_minitime12/21/2011, 10:30 pm

Prologue


I live with my family none of us related by blood. We, the six in our family, are genetically altered. Our DNA is 98 percent human, 2 percent avian. We live in the deep Rocky Mountains of Colorado. We will never know our parents or where we’re from. I’m not the leader of the house, far from it. Kali is our leader, she’s 18. I’m the youngest my name’s Riley and I’m 13. Amber is 14, Jake is 15, Lucy is 13, and Kat is 16. Kali is like our mom, but she cares about me the most. I know because I can read minds in addition to flying. We escaped from the lab/prison we were made seven years ago. Welcome to our nightmare.
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Nice! I loooove the "Welcome to our nightmare" part it's a great addition!
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WAY too short, but I love the idea!
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It's only a prologue, it's not a real chapter, so it doesn't have to be long.

I like it, please continue.
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Chapter One

My nightmare started like this, Kali and I were on the beach somewhere with two other people that Kali knew. The out of know where Erasers appeared and shoved me in a crate, Kali and the two normal people started attacking the Erasers but more came and they put me on a chopper and took me away. In the choppers mirrors I saw Kali flying towards the chopper. She hung on to a landing skid. An Eraser pointed a gun at her and I yelled for her. She let go of the skid and fell.
I woke up startled by the nightmare. I pull out my iPod and see its 5 AM. I groan and listen to my playlist. I start drawing in one of my sketch books. My bed is covered in my sketch books and books about airplanes. I draw the flock on a cruise ship with a medium sized airliner flying over. I spend an hour drawing in it. I flip through one of my other sketch books for 30 minutes. I sit and think for a while, and after another thirty minutes Kali walks in to wake us up. She looks at me sitting up when she walks in. “Good morning, Kali.”
“Hey Riley, why you up so early?” She asks.
I nod and get out of bed and get dressed as Kali goes to wake the others. I walk out to the kitchen, and sit on the couch. I turn the TV on and watch ‘Adventure Time.’ I slouch down as Kali and everyone else walks in and says their ‘Good Mornings’ to everyone. Kali and Amber make breakfast while we watch TV. When breakfast is ready we all sit down to eat. Lucy pipes up “Let’s go pick berries.”
Kali said, “That’s a good idea.”
Everyone agrees it’s a good idea.
After we finish breakfast we get ready to leave. After we walk out the door we run and launch ourselves upward flying to the wild berry patch. We landed after close to thirty minutes of flying. We started picking berries and putting them into bags. I strayed to the outer edge of the patch away from the flock. That was my mistake. I heard a voice that said, “Hello piggy, pig, pig.”
I turned around to see about four Erasers surrounding me. I yelled at the top of my lungs, “KALI!” I turned to face the flock and tried to run, but an Eraser held me back, “KALIKA!” I cry out. This time they hear me, and start to run to my rescue. It’s too late an Eraser is putting me in a crate and carrying me to a Hummer. I see them unfolding they’re wings. “HELP! KALIKA! PLEASE!” The Erasers throw me in the back of the Hummer. They drive away. I pray the flock is coming, but I hear a chopper starting with its low “Whomp, Whomp, Whomp.” I see the flock chasing the Hummer through the slits in the crate and back windshield. The Hummer stopped, and the Erasers got me out threw me in the chopper and piled in
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Chapter Two
I get air sick so about 20 minutes in to the flight I started puking violently. The helicopter flew for hours to the south west, ‘Great,’ I thought, ‘I’m going back to the School.’ I fell asleep some time during the flight.
When I woke up I smelt antiseptics and plastic tubing. I say several colorful swear words. The room was all white with one door, key card lock, and no windows. The door opens, and it’s the guy who saved us. Damn, after six years I finally forgot his name. He open opened the door on the crate and bend down to look inside when I didn’t immediately come out. He said, “Come on Riley, I need to talk to you.”
I stared at him trying to tell if he was gonna pull out a Colt 45 and blow holes in my torso and my face. I ruefully crawl out of the crate. He stands up and opens the door of the room I walk out the door and wait for him to guide me down the series of halls to a lounge. On the way I memorized escape routes, if I can. I look around the lounge. He opens the door to a back room. I walk inside and see there’s a small coffee table and two small sofas. “Have a seat, Riley.”
I cautiously sit in one. He makes a coffee for himself and chocolate milk, with way too much chocolate sauce, just the way I like it. “Riley,” he begins. “So nice to see you again.”
“What’s your name? I forgot over the last six years we thought you were dead. I thought it’s something along the lines of Mother F**ker.” I said
“No, my name is Nick. It’s nice to see you again.”
“Wish I could say the same.”
He looks at me like he still loves us, while I resist the urge to spit on him I remember some lines from my favorite song. I begin, “I see the love in disguise, I see the pain hidden in your pride, I see you’re not satisfied, I see the truth in your eyes, I see the gilt beneath the pain, I see the scars that remain.”
He stares at me. “They’re going to run test on you, be ready. I’m not satisfied yet.”
I stand up and flip the coffee table to my left and the glass on the table shattered. Nick pressed a button,”Don’t make us regret making you.” At the exact moment he finished his sentence three Erasers walked in with stun guns. I put my hands up and drop to my knees. Two put their stun guns in their belts and each take one of my arms. Before we leave I spit on Nick. An Eraser hit me in the back of the head, knocking me unconscious.
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Chapter 3
I woke up to see Nick and his son who probably ten watching me. “Can I help you?” I ask
“No.” Nick said, “Josh watch experiment sixteen.” After his sentence he left me with Josh.
“Hey, Josh can you get me a laptop?”
“Sure thing.”
He unlocked my cage and an Eraser escorted us to a room stuffed to the gills with computers. I sat at one and emailed the flock that I’ll escape and head back, and if I didn’t contact them in four days they should come help me.
“I’m done, thanks.” I said when I was done
“Okay. Let’s go.” Josh said. He and the Eraser escorted me back to the room. The Eraser guards had key cards! I could get out by jumping the guard. Then I just need to get to a larger city. Email Kali and get home.
On the second day they took me outside. I watched the other experiments get attacked by the new Erasers this generation had girls and wings! ‘Oh crap,’ I thought, ‘This will be fun when it’s my turn.’
One of the older Erasers opened my cage and yanked me out by the color on my shirt, and dropped me on ground, hard. “Ow!”
He grinned and shot a sound pistol. I jumped and flew off thinking, ‘Idiots forgot to tie my wings to my back.’ I heard several gun shots. I flew faster and farther from the School towards Vegas, the home of weird.
I landed a half mile south of the Strip. I walked to the nearest internet café and got on the computer and emailed Kali, ‘I’m out and in Vegas. Where do you want to meet me? If you don’t replay between not and tomorrow at noon. I’ll zigzag through Arizona, Cali, Oregon, Washington (State), Idaho, and Utah (in that order) before I come home.’ I walked up the strip. Cops looked at me funny, but I tried to look like I know what I was doing. The police didn’t bother me. I walked in to the Luxor and bought a room. I read the check-in lady’s mind, and said “Yes, I am young to be buying a room at a hotel/casino in Vegas. Does this room face the airport?”
“No it’s, is that a problem, sir.”
“Yes it is. Is there one facing the airport vacant?”
“Yes, we do have one facing the airport vacant. Here are your keys.” She handed me the room keys. I took them and went up the elevators and to my room. I laid on the bed and immediately fell asleep.
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Chapter 4
I woke at ten that morning, I moaned. I pulled myself out of the bed I left the room keys on the bed and left the hotel. I walked to an internet café and waited for noon to come around. At noon I went over to a computer. No new emails. I walked out of the café. I walked to an abandoned parking lot and took off. I flew over Lake Mead and into Arizona. I saw some older guys surround a girl. I tucked my wings in and landed in the foliage fifty feet away. I walked out of the small forest I’d landed in. I walked up behind what appeared to be the head honcho of the group, and said, “Dude, come on. You don’t want to jump this little girl.”
He turned around to face me so did the other two thugs. I motioned for the girl to run, and she did. The head honcho swung at me. I dodged and kicked him in the soft spot so hard he blacked out. I saw one had a pump action, twelve gauge shot gun. I punched the other one and ran into the forest. I heard shots fired and the two run after me. I heard five shots and the sixth one hit me right wing. I felt the warm sticky blood clot my feathers together. I hid in some bushes. I saw them run by. I waited five minutes after the walked by before I got up and walked back to the other guy, he was still out cold. I stumbled through the small forest. My wound burned and throbbed. After the adrenaline wore off minutes felt like hours. After five minutes of trudging through the small woods I came up behind a house. I hid in the bushes, doing recon. I started to feel very dizzy and lightheaded. I saw the girl from earlier walk outside with her dog. “Go potty, Pablo.”
I stood up and looked at her. She stared at. I told her, “I need some help.”
After her dog was done going to the bathroom she led me inside. She introduced me to her mom, Dr. Lopez. Her daughter’s name is Amy. Dr. Lopez asked, “What’s wrong Riley?”
I was hopelessly out of options, so I turned around and unfolded my right wing. Which one third of the six was the chocolate brown for the first six inches the rest was crimson. Dr. Lopez and Amy gasped, “Riley am I dreaming?” Asked Dr. Lopez
“Sadly, you’re not. I got shot with a twelve gauge, can we get the bullet out?! Please don’t call an ambulance.”
“Yes, I’m a vet. Amy, Bring him to the bathroom upstairs.” She walked out of the kitchen as Amy led me to the bathroom. Oh the irony.
When Amy and I got to the bathroom I sat on the toilet facing the wall. I was taking my shirt of as Dr. Lopez walked in, “Hey, Doc,” I said, “Anything you’re gonna put me on, to help with the?”
“Not unless you want any.” She replied.
“Nope. When you’re ready.”
“Uh, Riley, I need you wing, please.”
I unfolded my injured wing, refusing to let myself grunt, squeak, shriek, or make any sound to suggest I was in pain. I clenched my fist as Dr. Lopez moved my feathers to expose the wound. She start pulling out a few pellets. After thirty painful minutes, Dr Lopez finally said, “All done.”
“Why do shot guns have metal pellets ,and not just one bullet?”
“Now, Riley, I want you to rest for at least a week.”
‘Three days,’ I thought. “I need to get somewhere in the next three days.”
“A week, Riley.”
“Four days.”
“Six.” She said calmly.
“Five.” I said, trying not to raise, my voice.
“Fine let’s go call your parents.”
She walked out of the bathroom and went down stairs. I followed her and grabbed the phone I dialed our house number. After five rings Lucy picked up the phone. “Hello?” She said I didn’t reply. “Hello?” She asked again
“Hey, Lucy. It’s Riley.”
She said, “What?!?”
I heard Jake in the background ask, “Who is it, Luc?”
“It’s Riley.” She said back
“Hey, Lucy put Kali on the phone.” I said
“Okay.” She said.
I waited for a minute or two before Lucy said, “Hey she is.”
Lucy handed the phone to Kali, and Kali said, “Hello?”
“Hey, Kali. It’s Riley.”
“Where have you been?” She yelled at me.
“Um... A) Ow, B) The school, Vegas, Arizona, Dr. Lopez’s house.”
“Who’s this Dr. Lopez?!?”
“C) Getting shot. Dr. Lopez is a vet who took 12 gauge shotgun pellets out of my wing.”
“Who shot you?!?”
“Stop yelling.”
“Sorry it’s just we haven’t heard from you in a week.”
“You didn’t get my emails? Never mind that, some guys shot me and I’m stuck in Arizona for five days.”
“Okay I’ll fly down there to meet you.”
“Don’t, please.”
“Why not?”
“Because, you can’t carry me to Colorado.”
“Jake and I can.”
“It’s not going to be worth it, Kali.”
“Riley, you need to be here right now.”
“Can I meet you in Denver?” I asked.
“Yeah, at the airport.” She answered
“I’ll be there tomorrow morning.”
“Okay. Riley?”
“Yeah?”
“Be safe.”
“I will.”
I hung up the phone. I walked up the stairs laid on a bed and passed out on the bed.
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Chapter 5
I woke up on the bed with a pillow under my head, an iPhone on the night stand, and clothes on the floor next to my combat boots. I looked around the room. I slipped the clothes on, and beneath that was a sweater with large slits in the back. I unfolded my wings and found my shirt had slits in it. I put the jacket on and called Kali again. “Hello?” She asks
“Hey Kali I’m going to stay here today.”
“Okay, Riley.”
“Bye.”
I hung up the phone and walked downstairs. I walked into the kitchen. “Good morning, Riley.” Dr. Lopez said.
“Good morning. I’m going to take a shower.” I said.
“Aren’t you going to eat breakfast?” She asked
“Later. Hey, Doc, thanks for the stuff.”
“Hey, Riley, keep it.”
“Wha-?” I asked.
“Keep it.”
I thought for a second then said. “Okay. What’s for breakfast?”
“What do you want?”
“IHOP.” I said.
“Okay. Go get in the car.” Doctor Lopez told me.
I stared at her. “Where’s the car?”
“Outside in the driveway.”
“Okay.”
I walked out to the car and got in, and thus started our montage of exploring the city. We went to IHOP, Tillys, and like twelve other stores. We picked Amy up at soccer practice. We went back to their house, and had enchiladas for dinner. We watched TV for a while before Dr. Lopez said, “Time for bed.”
“Okay.” I said, I was thinking, ‘Tonight I’ll sneak out.’ I walked up stairs and laid on the bed waiting for eleven the night. When eleven finally came around I opened the window letting the fresh air pour in and popped the screen out. I ran down the roof and jumped, and I popped out my wings. I flew towards Colorado, to suprise the flock.
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Yay!!! It's getting so good!
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Chapter 6
I landed on the roof of our house. I knocked on Kali’s window. She bolted up, ready to attack. I tapped lightly on the glass. She looked at me tiredly. She opened the window, and I crawled in. “Riley.” She said, “Go pack your stuff. Erasers have surrounded the house.”
“Oh, okay. I’ll go pack.”
I walked down the hallway to my room I grabbed my iPod head phones, iPod charger, and my Swiss Army knife. I turned around and saw Lucy and Amber leaning against my doorway. “Can help you with something?” I asked them. With that they charged me and tackled me in a bear hug. I’m two inches taller than Amber, and four or five inches taller Lucy. When we hit the floor the wind got knocked out of me. “Please get off of me.”
“No.” They both said.
“Please. I smell, my wing hurts, and I’m covered in dirt.” I pleaded
With that they both got off of me and I caught my breath. “I’m going to take a shower, now.”
I walked in to the bathroom and took my shower. After that we left, under the cover of night. After that everything was blurred together. Right up until we crossed the Mississippi River. Erasers came at us from every direction, and yes, the Erasers were flying. We got in a circle as they surrounded us. I threw the first punch at the closest Eraser and then all hell broke loose. Before ten minute were up I had a black eye, a bloody nose, and a dislocate shoulder. I kept fighting with all the injuries. My arm broke while punching one of the girl erasers. I yelled to Kali, “Red Tail dropping!”
One of the erasers head and grabbed my ankle and broke it. I dropped straight down, Lucy following me. We landed on a beach covered in oil. “This is, gross.” Lucy said.
“Amen, to that.” No sooner did I finish that sentence Kat and Jake fell from the sky. Both covered in blood. I jumped underneath them so the crude oil wouldn’t get in their wounds.
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Oooooooh nice.
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Writing more, anytime soon?
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I'm sorry school and some other things are slowing down my writing. I'll be writing as soon and as quickly as possible.
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Whoa, it's been a while, but here it is Chapter 7.



Chapter 7
I ran and jumped underneath Jake and Kat. I was covered in the oil on the beach, as Jake and Kat landed on top of me I felt I felt at least two ribs and my left wrist break. Kali came down and landed next to us. “What’s going on here?!” she demanded
“We’re having a dog pile!” I said trying to keep oil from going up my nose and in my mouth.
“We don’t have time for sarcasm, Riley.” She said sternly.
A person running on the beach saw up and the blood pooling around us. The person must’ve called 911 because ambulances were there in minutes. The EMTs pulled me off the stack and slapped me on a gurney and put me in one of the two ambulances. I was fighting the restraints when Kali came in the back of the ambulance. I stopped fighting when she looked at me. “Hey,” I said nervously, “why am I in the ambulance?”
“Because you have a concussion, various broken bones, and your appendix burst.”
“Oh, wow.” I said calmly as she took a seat. I felt a small pinch in my wrist, and I was asleep before the ambulance was moving.
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OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is as good as the regular Maximum Ride series. But this goes by faster.I LOVE it though. :D :D :D :D :D
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Yep. He's good.
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