Name: Tarence Paterson
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Eyes: Dark Blue
Hair: Dirty Blond
Height: 5'7
Body Type: Slim
Skin Color: Caucasian,
God Parent: Thanatos
Mortal Parent: Unkown (Orphan)
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: None
Talents: excells in combat with polearms,very social.
Weapon**: Dory Spear, Crossbow
Flaws: Thinks He knows about survival because he grew up in a gang ridden neighborhood. - won't take anything from anyone so will easily pick a fight. - Gets very angry, very easily.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can raise Dead to aid in battle for 20 minutes max before fainting and becomes to weak to fight at 10 minutes. can summon 4 undead at a time and the undead he summons are relatively weak fighters compaired to most demigods, makes user weak though too many uses or a massive use can result in unconsciousness.

Life Before CHB*: Grew up in a foster home. Ran away at age 4, and met a guy named Larry who raised him on the street. It became more of a father-son relationship. On Tarences 12th birthday larry took him walking around the neighborhood. A satyr sent from camp half-blood talked to him in a alley and told larry to wait outside. Members of a gang pulled up and drive-byed the alley. The satyr and Tarence survived, but larry wasn't so lucky. Tarence was so mad the satyr had to knock him unconscious to get him to go to camp.

RP Example*: I woke up in what looked like a make-shift hospital. The only thing I rembered were loud repeated Bangs, and me screaming for my former mentor. I felt like tiger woods mistaked the back of my head for a golf ball. I got up, a little shaky on my feet. I had no Idea were I was, but there was a nice warm bed right under me, might as well enjoy it I thought. I lie down and quickly fall back into sleep.

Any notes about your character: suffered extreme emotional distress on the way to CHB.

Name: Lawrence Miller
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Eyes: Light Blue
Hair: Dirty Blond
Height:5'7
Body Type: Caucasian, Pale
God Parent: Eris
Mortal Parent: Lisa Miller, now Deceased
Country of Origin: America
Pets: Two Dachshund's
Talents: specializes in medium ranged combat (spear)
Weapon(s): Dory spear, Dagger
Notes: Easy to get angry, very reckless when angered, could be taken advantage of in Battle. Also socially Awkward.
Flaws: easily angered, when angered reckless - lacks swordplay skill and prefers a spear, can be a flaw or strength - very cocky and has a never back down attitude.
Powers (optional): Can make target attack the first thing it see's regardeless if its friend foe or even Lawrence Himself. Downside uses enough power to make user too weak to follow up, so mostly used for distractions. children of ares can resist this very well and his powers last up to 5 minutes. can only use his powers twice a day.
Life Before CHB: Had a Normal boring life. Until accident involving an Empousa, on the run ever since. After Two days, CHB sent a Satyr. His mother actually saw him on the way to CHB. Lawrence got mad at his mom for her begging and pushed her off. pulling off the side of the road, a semi truck slammed into Lawrence's mom's car. He then vowed basically not to push any one to the side when they ask for help, or be a bystander if someone is being pounded. Always help, appreciated or not.

RP Example: I walk into camp, I thought I had seen it all until the satyr told me to go to the big house to meet chiron. I know some of the stories and I know chirons supposed to be a centaur, but I wasn't in the mood to be 'shocked' or 'excited' I still had my head on my mom. I hesitated before going. "well go" the satyr said, oh yeah and his name is austin. I head for the big house, not taking a glance back.

Children of ares resist very well and depending on willpower, others can to. his powers last up to 5 minutes. can only use his powers twice a day.

Approved.

he can command undead 20 minutes max before fainting and becomes to weak to fight at 10 minutes. can summon 4 undead at a time and the undead he summons are relatively weak fighters compaired to most demigods.

Approved.

cool character.....but i agree with decus et veritas

OP. STOP POSTING ON OTHER PEOPLE'S CHARACTER FORMS. It's not your job dear.

O I forgot lolz my bad
Just edited it read it and give feed back

Approved.

Is the halberd made of celestial bronze?

You must allow a wider range of people to resist his power. The whole idea of having a parasite-like power might not be allowed, so I'll have the admins decide.

Your Life Before CHB and RP Example have to be 5 sentences long each.

edited and I really couldnt think of a resistant but oh well he doesnt have to have a power

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Name: Lucy Paterson
Age: 10
Gender: Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Long and Blond
Height: 5'2"
Body Type: Slender, but fit
Skin Color: pale
God Parent: Unclaimed
Mortal Parent: Unknown (Orphan)
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: None
Talents: Swimming, dancing, Annoying people
Weapon**: None
Flaws: Annoys people way to much, Scared to fight, Has short-term memory loss
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: Lucy Lived on the streets with her brother until one day she was shot from a drive. She was Rushed to the hospital were she stayed in a coma for two years. A satyr was sent and picked her upand took her to CHB.
RP Example*:"Are we there Yet?" I asked goat man "No" He replied I asked again, and he said the same thing. Wow I love to annoy people. "Hey goat man" I say He lets out an annoyed sigh and says "what" And I reply "Are we there yet?"
Any notes about your characters: She is the little sister to My other charrie Terance

Add three more complete sentences to the Life before CHB.

Fixed

Approved.

What have you altered?

His talents, Eye color, Life before CHB, His flaws, And the RP example.