SilverWispies
 Number of posts: 1 Age: 15 Registration date: 2012-01-05
 | Subject: New Character Form 1/5/2012, 12:37 pm | |
| Name: Carnegie Maloney Age:14 Gender:female Eyes:large, navy blue. Hair: wavy, jet black, lenght is halfway between bellybutton and chest. Height: 5,2 Body Type:Slender, thin, long legs and long arms Skin Color: Very pale, Imagine Snow white's sking God Parent: Athena Mortal Parent: Caster Maloney Country of Origin: Canada Pets: Owns a pet owl. Talents: Is great with arts and sketching mainly painting, has a way with words and can write great poems and stories. Weapon**: Has a short small dagger used for self protection rather than killing off the oponent. It is made of celestial bronze and is double sided. The blade itself is engraved with a poem that she wrote as a child, the dagger came in the mail from Manhatten on her birthday when she was in grade 7, she has never used it and left in in the box because she thought it was creepy. Flaws: Always overthinking things to the endth degree. Thinks of every single possibility at all times. Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Has the ability form art with anything, is very smart and cunning and has used this ability above human capabilities. Life Before CHB*: She grew up in a strong family situation. Her dad was loving and kind and re-married after Athena had vanished, leaving him with his child. The women cared for Carnegie as her child and she grew up believing that she was her mother as well. In grade 7 Carnegie began to slip behind in school and moved from 5 different schools from grade 7-8. RP Example*: Any notes about your characters: Carnegie is an extremely bold and memorable person. She cares about her family and those she loves. When something goes wrong Carnegie stays calm and uses strategies to decipher the problems and fix them. |
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Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: New Character Form 1/5/2012, 4:29 pm | |
| Alex, please don't comment on character forms. You need an RP example, it's like writing a story (Example: I walked outside and the sun shone on my face. There was a warm breeze as I made my way to the beach.) Add a flaw. Those are not powers, more like talents. Powers are not required. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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