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Wind Eon



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PostSubject: Nathans Life    1/28/2012, 9:08 pm

Name: Nathan Kane
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Eyes: Grey
Hair: Black with grey streak
Height: 5'9"
Body Type: lean
Skin Color: normal
God Parent: Boreas
Mortal Parent: Lana Kane
Country of Origin: United States of America
Pets: Guine pig named Brownie
Talents: Able to summon cold windstorms
Skills: close combat fighting
Weapon: Celestial bronze dagger with a blue gem in a black hilt
Flaws: sometimes dose risky things without thinking first, he gets annoyed if someone (or sonething) ticks him off, and he has has trouble working in groups
Powers: Cold windstorm that is 15 feet wide and long/wide that lasts 5 minutes and the winds are 15 miles per hour and he can only use it if someone he cares for is in danger. He can make mini wind tornados in his hand when hes bored though Smile
Life Before CHB: Never knowing his father, Nathan lived in Maryland like any other kid. He wasn't a bully or one of the kids that's famouse for getting in trouble. He was an A-B student., but he never thought he would belonged in a group. It was just another summer with a normal summer hurricane. It didnt seem all that bad to him but his mother always acted strange during these storms. Nathan overheard his mother saying "Im sorry, i just cant let my son know about this" their was a strong wind" "No, I just cant" All of a sudden the storm was gone.

(Note, I am not breaking the rules by doing this, I just found a creative way of introducing Nathan to you Admins out their Smile )


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PostSubject: Re: Nathans Life    1/28/2012, 9:09 pm

(You're not breaking the rules at all... why would you ever think that.)

You can't have a silver dagger; we only allow Celestial bronze.

Add two more flaws.

How long do his windstorms last, and how much of an area can they cover? How many times a day can he use this power?

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Kendall, Daughter of Ares
Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite
Claire, Daughter of Hecate
Archer, Son of Hecate
Stella, Daughter of Ouranos
Meagan, Daughter of Gaea
Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon
Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus
Nelly, Daughter of Apollo
Benji, Daughter of Kuk
Deja, Daughter of Odyne
Mason, Son of Hermes
Waldo, Son of Hermes
Terra, Daughter of Tiki
Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort
Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort


You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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PostSubject: I fixed it    1/28/2012, 9:28 pm

I fixed it, could you look at it again?
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PostSubject: Re: Nathans Life    1/28/2012, 9:29 pm

He needs to have a limit to number of times he can do it and how long, usually in minutes. It also needs to be a certain size. How strong is the wind in the storm?

ALSO: You forgot RP Example. It's like telling a story from your character's point of view. You need 5 sentences of that.

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Kendall, Daughter of Ares
Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite
Claire, Daughter of Hecate
Archer, Son of Hecate
Stella, Daughter of Ouranos
Meagan, Daughter of Gaea
Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon
Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus
Nelly, Daughter of Apollo
Benji, Daughter of Kuk
Deja, Daughter of Odyne
Mason, Son of Hermes
Waldo, Son of Hermes
Terra, Daughter of Tiki
Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort
Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort


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PostSubject: Re: Nathans Life    1/28/2012, 9:41 pm

Kendall wrote:
You need 5 sentences of that.


I didnt see that but ok, is it in third or first person?
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PostSubject: Re: Nathans Life    1/28/2012, 9:48 pm

Either one is okay.

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Kendall, Daughter of Ares
Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite
Claire, Daughter of Hecate
Archer, Son of Hecate
Stella, Daughter of Ouranos
Meagan, Daughter of Gaea
Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon
Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus
Nelly, Daughter of Apollo
Benji, Daughter of Kuk
Deja, Daughter of Odyne
Mason, Son of Hermes
Waldo, Son of Hermes
Terra, Daughter of Tiki
Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort
Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort


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PostSubject: Re: Nathans Life    1/28/2012, 9:58 pm

This might be stupid to ask but could you count the 2nd part of my "Life before CHB"?
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PostSubject: Re: Nathans Life    1/28/2012, 10:00 pm

Unfortunately no, if you mean to count it as your RP Example.

________________
Kendall, Daughter of Ares
Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite
Claire, Daughter of Hecate
Archer, Son of Hecate
Stella, Daughter of Ouranos
Meagan, Daughter of Gaea
Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon
Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus
Nelly, Daughter of Apollo
Benji, Daughter of Kuk
Deja, Daughter of Odyne
Mason, Son of Hermes
Waldo, Son of Hermes
Terra, Daughter of Tiki
Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort
Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort


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PostSubject: Re: Nathans Life    1/28/2012, 10:06 pm

Kendall wrote:
Unfortunately no, if you mean to count it as your RP Example.


All right I understand know I guess that will be my example. Do I have to add more to it or is that ok? Writing RP's isn't one of my strongest points but I like reading them
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PostSubject: Re: Nathans Life    1/28/2012, 10:11 pm

Put a separate section in your form for it and write things from your character's point of view. The last part of your Life Before CHB wouldn't really count as an RP Example.

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Kendall, Daughter of Ares
Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite
Claire, Daughter of Hecate
Archer, Son of Hecate
Stella, Daughter of Ouranos
Meagan, Daughter of Gaea
Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon
Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus
Nelly, Daughter of Apollo
Benji, Daughter of Kuk
Deja, Daughter of Odyne
Mason, Son of Hermes
Waldo, Son of Hermes
Terra, Daughter of Tiki
Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort
Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort


You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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