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CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 2:48 pm | |
| Name: Blade Maue Age: 15 Gender: Female Eyes: Silver Hair: Electric blue Height: 5’4 Body Type: thin, Skin Color: Tan God Parent: Thanatos Mortal Parent: Jane Maue Country of Origin: USA Pets: Snake named Venom Talents: Music, Art (Painting, Drawing, etc.) Weapon**: Stygian sword Flaws: ADHD, lack of friends, isolation, dyslexia, klutz, pessimist. Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Life Before CHB*: Blade was picked on at school and was isolated. She could normally be found hanging out at the cemetery or at the skate park with her only friend Logan, whom shortly moved away to New Jersey and left Blade alone with no friends. Most kids made fun of Blade because of her only parent. She had never heard from from her father. Blade's aunt hated her guts and tried to convince Blade's mom to leave her at the river at age 5. Blade's mom never let her see any of her relatives. RP Example*: I received a letter telling me that he moved away, and I swore on my life that I would never trust anyone ever again. Logan left me here to rot. I walked into a Church courtyard where I tried to clear my head. He was really gone. Not a single word of leaving me here, but here I am dying every second. Any notes about your characters: Blade has an edgy rocker look and loves the rain, she also likes pandas, and has broken her right arm 3 times. She hates dogs (poodles) and always has her nails painted black. She loves rock and screamo. Favorite bands: Asking alexandria, and Black veil Brides. Her powers always seem like there more active at night than anything else. She dropped out of school at 12 and that’s when her mother told her about CHB.
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 2:52 pm | |
| I don't think those are really powers, unless you want to elaborate on them. Afflict and endure what?
Is her "sitting still" flaw an inability to sit still? That could go under ADHD, which is a standard demigod flaw.
Add two more sentences to Life Before CHB. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 3:03 pm | |
| do i re-post my whole application or just my corrections? |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 3:05 pm | |
| There's a little button on the side of your post that says Edit. Click on it to edit in the corrections. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 3:23 pm | |
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 3:28 pm | |
| I don't think we'd allow either of those powers for Thanatos kids. (You don't need powers.)
Add another flaw. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 3:34 pm | |
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 3:37 pm | |
| ... Try adding another flaw. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 3:57 pm | |
| edited. I added new flaws. |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/29/2012, 4:02 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Phoenix Dawn 1/30/2012, 10:13 pm | |
| Name: Phoenix Dawn Age: 13 Gender: Female Eyes: Red Hair: Black Height: 5’1 Body Type: Slim Skin Color: Pale God Parent: Ares Mortal Parent: Christina Dawn Country of Origin: UK Pets: none Talents: Archery, hand-to-hand combat, and singing Weapon**: Celestial Bronze dagger Flaws: very bad ADD, Gullible, too trusting, afraid of water, and easily gets lost. Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Life Before CHB*: Phoenix has always been influenced by her friends and taken advantage of. She is smart but can’t see the difference between a good and bad person. She loved hanging around the old tree house in the woods, before a fire came and scorched all of her childhood memories. Phoenix has been mentally scared for life. Everything took a turn for the worse after that. She started not being able to control her anger, even though she is extremely calm most of the time. This caused her to lose everyone she ever trusted. Except her mother. Her mom told her about a camp where she could meet other people just like herself and maybe make true friends. This camp was CHB. RP Example*: “ NO! I will NEVER go near water again! NEVER!” I (Phoenix) cried “Chill out, just do it, we all want you too.” Tommy the school bad boy said. “It’s to high anyway, someone else can do it, plus I can’t swim. LET ME GO!” I said trying to get out of his lock on my arm. “No you’ll do it, Even if you can’t swim”
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|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/30/2012, 10:29 pm | |
| You mean celestial bronze dagger, right? ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/31/2012, 5:14 pm | |
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/31/2012, 7:10 pm | |
| Is the classification of the dagger important? |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 1/31/2012, 11:18 pm | |
| Please don't double post. And yes. Approved. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Damien Cage 2/4/2012, 8:28 pm | |
| Name: Damien Cage Age: 14 Gender: Male Eyes: sea green Hair: Orange Height: 5’9 Body Type: muscular/ thin Skin Color: Tan God Parent: Chione Mortal Parent: Adam Cage Country of Origin: Sweden Pets: none Talents: Skiing, Archery, Painting, sports. Weapon**: Bow and Arrow Flaws: dyslexia, klutz, bad posture, tries to be funny. Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Life Before CHB*: Damien has a twin brother named Fang who he spent most of his time with. His brother was his only friend because they were pretty isolated brothers. They never played with other kids, so they got picked on a lot. They never stood up for themselves. They seem like the type of guys that would be popular at school but they continued to be the isolated ones. RP Example*: “Are you sure? Dad wouldn’t approve of this…” Damien said with concern. “It will be fine” Fang said smoothly, “ No one will even miss us I swear.” “ I guess that’s true, school isn’t important to me anymore nothing is.”
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Fang Cage 2/4/2012, 8:38 pm | |
| Name: Fang Cage Age: 14 Gender: Male Eyes: sea green Hair: Midnight Blue Height: 5’9 Body Type: muscular/ thin Skin Color: Tan God Parent: Chione Mortal Parent: Adam Cage Country of Origin: Sweden Pets: none Talents: Drawing, Carving, and running. Weapon**: a celestial bronze sword. Flaws: dyslexia, ADHD, biting nails, can't swim, and arrogant. Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Life Before CHB*: Fang has a twin brother named Damien who he spent most of his time with. His brother was his only friend because they were pretty isolated brothers. They never played with other kids, so they got picked on a lot. They never stood up for themselves. They seem like the type of guys that would be popular at school but they continued to be the isolated ones. RP Example*: “Are you sure? Dad wouldn’t approve of this…” Damien said with concern. “It will be fine” Fang said smoothly, “ No one will even miss us I swear.” “ I guess that’s true, school isn’t important to me anymore nothing is.”
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 2/4/2012, 8:46 pm | |
| Add another flaw. And how is hitting his head a flaw? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 2/4/2012, 8:57 pm | |
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 2/4/2012, 8:59 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 2/4/2012, 9:26 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | CynicalSkin Member

 Number of posts: 885 Age: 13 Registration date: 2012-01-26
 | Subject: Ivy Blood 2/5/2012, 3:26 pm | |
| Name: Ivy Blood Age: 16 Gender: female Eyes: grey blue Hair: Hot pink Height: 5’5 Body Type: thin Skin Color: pale God Parent: Deimos Mortal Parent: Karla Blood Country of Origin: USA Pets: none Talents: Climbing, sword fighting, knot tying, and weaving, Weapon**: a celestial bronze dagger. Flaws: dyslexia, Claustrophobia, Agateophobia (fear of insanity), Androphobia- (Fear of men). Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Life Before CHB* : Ivy seems like the weakest and most fearful person in the world. But in all honesty she was not. She was isolated her whole life, had no brothers or sisters, or friends. She never talked to anyone except her mother, or female teachers, only if necessary. She would lock herself in her room and do nothing but stare at the ceiling. One day that all changed when her mother told her about CHB. RP Example*: ‘keep your head down’ Ivy thought to herself. ‘no one will notice you, take your seat, listen to the teacher and don’t draw any attention to yourself.’ “Excuse me miss?” Mrs. Crawford asked Ivy. Ivy stood there with fear in her eyes, “Ye-yesss?” She answered Ivy was shaking now. “Im Mrs. Crawford, I will be your teacher this year.”
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: CynicalSkin's characters 2/5/2012, 3:27 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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