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Name: Brandon Moore
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Eyes: Black
Hair: Brown
Height: 5' 3"
Body Type: thin
Skin Color: pale
God Parent: Thanatos
Mortal Parent: Denise Moore
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: A German Shepard named Buddy
Talents: can balance really well (such as on a 3" pipe on a five story building), photographic memory, natural leader
Weapon**: A bow and arrow
Flaws: fearless, pyromaniac, asthma
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none
Life Before CHB*: Brandon lived in Maine until he was 13. He lived with his mom and Step-dad for a couple of years before they moved to New York, They lived in a country house just outside of New York City. He went to school like a normal boy, but his mom seemed to get more and more nervous everyday. On his sixteenth birthday his mom took him to Camp Half Blood and told him to stay there and never leave.
RP Example*: I walked into the store and bought a Monster and a bag of chips, i payed for them and left. I hailed a taxi and told him where to go, he stopped in front of my house and i paid him. I walked through my front door and sat on the couch "hey mom, i'm home" i yell, turning on the TV. I open my Monster and take a drink, I finish it and crumple it up. i open the bag of chips and eat one. I throw away the can and bag of chips, i walk up to my room and turn on my stereo.
Any notes about your characters: none

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