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syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 6:19 pm | |
| Name: Arek Kuso Age:17 Gender:male Eyes: left eye is blue, right eye is red Hair: medium-long hair, silver Height: 6"2 Body Type: slim Skin Color: caucasion, darker God Parent: Hermes Mortal Parent: Amerta Kuso Country of Origin: Ireland Pets: a Siberian husky, named Uko. (eyes are the same as mine.) Talents: running quite fast (normally up to speeds of 57 mph, and getting faster.) silver-tongued. (good at bartering, lying, and getting what i want.) can tell when someone is lying. Weapon**: a long-sword, and a dirk. both Cb. Flaws: shy, nervous, smoking, cocky, outrageous anger. Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): unknown currently. Life Before CHB*: Arek was a quite and dark kid, nobody knew him well at all. he was sitting around all day and doing whatever he could to keep from getting bored. some people broke into his house, his mom tried to fight them off, but she wasn't able to. they tied her up and threw her off to the side. they started looting the house. Arek came downstairs to see what was happening. suddenly he was thrown against the wall, and told to be quite. they put a bag over his head and he didn't know what happened afterwards. he woke up near a place that said Camp Half-blood. and he walked inside RP Example*: i was walking around, concentrating on finding my way through the forest. it was big and confusing. i got a little tired so i laid back and took a break under a tall oak. i pulled out my i-pod and started blasting the music. as i laid there, i started dozing off.
i jumped back up what seemed like an hour later, i woke up from a bad dream, i got up and started running though the forest terrified now. i didn't want to go back there any time soon. |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 10:30 pm | |
| The running 'talent' is a power. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 10:42 pm | |
| alright i fix it now, thanks for telling me. but don't i need three powers? (trying to avoid the extra thoughts.) |
|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 10:51 pm | |
| Name: Arek Kuso Age:17 Gender:male Eyes: left eye is blue, right eye is red Hair: medium-long hair, silver Height: 6"2 Body Type: slim Skin Color: caucasion, darker God Parent: Hermes Mortal Parent: Amerta Kuso Country of Origin: Ireland Pets: a Siberian husky, named Uko. (eyes are the same as mine.) Talents: silver-tongued. (good at bartering, lying, and getting what i want.) can tell when someone is lying. Weapon**: a long-sword, and a dirk. both Cb. Flaws: shy, nervous, smoking, cocky, outrageous anger, also impatient. Powers(must relate to god parent; optional:) running quite fast (normally up to speeds of 20 mph.) can do this for 6 minutes at a time, he has a total of 2 hours worth of full speed running each day. he has to rest 15 minutes between full speed runs, but he can jog normal speed for 5 minutes, with a 10 minute break in between. Life Before CHB*: Arek was a quite and dark kid, nobody knew him well at all. he was sitting around all day and doing whatever he could to keep from getting bored. some people broke into his house, his mom tried to fight them off, but she wasn't able to. they tied her up and threw her off to the side. they started looting the house. Arek came downstairs to see what was happening. suddenly he was thrown against the wall, and told to be quite. they put a bag over his head and he didn't know what happened afterwards. he woke up near a place that said Camp Half-blood. and he walked inside RP Example*: i was walking around, concentrating on finding my way through the forest. it was big and confusing. i got a little tired so i laid back and took a break under a tall oak. i pulled out my i-pod and started blasting the music. as i laid there, i started dozing off.
i jumped back up what seemed like an hour later, i woke up from a bad dream, i got up and started running though the forest terrified now. i didn't want to go back there any time soon.
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|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:36 pm | |
| Please don't double post. No, powers are not required. You just need three flaws, which you have. I'm not sure if 57 MPH is too fast or not. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:43 pm | |
| =-= my bad. so, is it good? i didn't hear any criticism there. well, maybe the speed thing, but ya gotta remember that Hermes is a speedy guy, runs really really fast.
so currently i am guessing that this is a win? |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:47 pm | |
| I'm not sure, I'm going to wait for an admin to decide. Sorry. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:51 pm | |
| oh, son of a...=-= this is where impatience gets to be a pain. alright, ill look up online the fastest speed of Hermes and then lower the take his speed, lower mine, and then we can call it even. if you like the speed. does that sound good? (is trying to avoid waiting.) |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:55 pm | |
| *sigh* I guess I'll go see on other charrie forms how fast they went. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:58 pm | |
| sorry man, impatience gets the best of me, i should add that as a flaw when i can. im already reading that he traveled up to 40 mph, but im not seeing that too easily, others say that he could move faster than you could blink, meh. i'll probobly go with 15-25 mph if that works well enough, thats still fast enough for me. |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:58 pm | |
| Yeah, I'm thinking 15-20 MPH is best. How long can he run that fast? How many times a day? ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Tue Jan 31, 2012 12:01 am | |
| i knew you would do that, hahaha. alright, check it in about 3 minutes. ill have it fixed completely |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Tue Jan 31, 2012 12:09 am | |
| How long does he have to rest in between? ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Tue Jan 31, 2012 12:14 am | |
| i fixed it. and im really hoping i did good this time. in fact, im positive it's good this time. |
|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Tue Jan 31, 2012 5:20 pm | |
| yep, its done and good, all im waiting for now is an approvement. i hope i got this right. |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Tue Jan 31, 2012 11:14 pm | |
| Please don't double post. Looks good. Approved. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: syn-aarons 2nd character. Thu Feb 02, 2012 9:01 pm | |
| Name: Synthos kai Age:13 Gender: male Eyes:eyes are green, with a red inner circle. Hair: long hair, bleached Height:4"5 Body Type: abnormally slim Skin Color: albino God Parent: Aeolus. Mortal Parent: ajuli kai Country of Origin: united states. Pets: bald eagle, with some of its feathers burned at the tip. Talents: i can run around fast. i can hear better than most animals. and i can jump very high into the air. Weapon**: a razor fan, of of course it is CB. Flaws: i am blind in one eye, i get hungry very very quickly, and i tend to be very very forgetful. Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): after i jump i can glide through the air for 16.5 seconds. i can only do this 11 times every 12 hours. i can also create a five foot tornado, which can spin at exactly 10 mph, it only lasts for a minute or until i call it off i can do this 13 times a day, but i need 10 minutes of rest between tornado's and there has to be wind blowing through the air, or my power is useless. another power i have is that i can use the wind to either forces my foes back, depending on their weight, and the heaviest i can force back is 160 pounds, i can do this 5 times a day. i can also propel my self forward 20 feet per second, (7 mph) using the wind, but i can only do this twice a day. Life Before CHB*: synthos was a scrawny little shrimp for his whole life, he was always bullied all the time for his height. he was depressed for about a year, until he realized something weird about himself. he would walk outside and the air was always blowing people away from him, and he started being able to jump over dumpsters and trucks and land safely on the other side. he asked his mom about this, and she told him that he needed to get in the car at that exact moment. RP Example*: i was running around jumping over cars and trucks, and just having a good time. my mom called me saying "hey syn, it's time you got home, can you bring home a gallon of milk?" i replied, "yea mom, i can do that, i got something to tell ya anyways." i hung up and jumped onto the top of a car that was moving in the direction of the store. i sat up there and surfed the car the whole way to the store.
once there, i walked in side and bought the milk and headed on home.
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:21 pm | |
| Add another flaw.
Most powerful thing he can do with wind? Heaviest person he can force back and how fast is he propelled when using that last power? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Sat Feb 04, 2012 4:28 pm | |
| alright, i thought i only needed 3 flaws, which i have. hungry, blind, a.d.d.. i just edited it |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Sat Feb 04, 2012 7:11 pm | |
| ADD is a standard demigod flaw, which is why I asked you to add another.
30 tornadoes a day is too much (and it should be at most 50 mph), and your propulsion rate should be a bit lower. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Sat Feb 04, 2012 8:09 pm | |
| 13.636363 is only 20 feet per second, i dont think thats too much, and it was the only one i agreed on, but ill change it. and the tornado thing, thats being a bit difficult, but ill change it. and the final thing is, thats not fair bout the flaw, it took me a while to figure out flaws for this guy, but once again, ill change it too.(no im not complaining, just explaining my view on these things. at least i said i'd change it.)
it is edited now. |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Sat Feb 04, 2012 8:11 pm | |
| All demigods have it, so basically you have five flaws. Two are dyslexia and ADHD/ADD. The other three are of your own choosing. It's not that hard to think of flaws if you think about how you'll RP your character's personality. (And yeah, you're definitely complaining....)
Approved. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: syn-aaron's 3/4 characters (twins.) Mon Feb 06, 2012 7:17 pm | |
| Name: auron cildechon Age:15 Gender: male Eyes: left eye is cyan, right eye is white Hair: purple Height: 5"5 Body Type: average Skin Color: caucasion God Parent: chione Mortal Parent: samuel cildechon Country of Origin: america Pets: siberian husky named cyanette Talents: is a dog whisperer, is a computer genious. Weapon**: dual kazeshini CB Flaws:cant do anything without his brother samuel, since they are inseparable. not very active. smokes regularly Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):can freeze water as he steps on it, he can only do it 5 times a day,he can only do it once every hour, and as he steps off of a certain area of water, it melts behind him, can only walkout for 50 ft. so when he reaches his limit, he needs his brother to come out to save him, or someone who can lift him and bring him back to shore can save him. when he and samuel are together, they can make an island of ice out in the middle of a body of water, it can only be less than 6ft, by 6ft, and they can only do this once a day, and it can stay built for up to a whole day, but if they keep it up for a whole day, they cant do it for 3 days as penalty for abuse of powers. Life Before CHB*: auron lived a very dull life, he was very, smart, but his brother samuel was always the favorite of the two. samuel and auron were twins, and they lived with their father, who taught them each one of his special traits. their father taught auron to be a computer tech nerd, and taught samuel to be a very active and very cool. sometimes auron wished he was taught to be cool too. but their father said that it was better that only one was taught to be cooler.
well, auron took this very painfully, and he spent most of his time in his room, building a new computer, he had 15 computers built, but he wanted to create bigger and better ones. one day, while he and his brother were hanging out in the lake, his brother made a bet that he could stand on water for 5 seconds, and auron, foolishly, said that he could stand on water for 10 seconds. they both shook hands, and walked out on to the lake, where they stood there, standing on ice, but it was the middle of july, which means the ice wouldn't be there. it was then when they realized that they had, as auron called it, "super natural powers." RP Example*: i was just standing around, trying to put some computer parts together, to make them better. i almost had it right, when dad came in and said "hey, how's my smart little computer whiz doing?" i slipped and accidentally shocked my self. i yelled, "damnit dad! ya made me mess up, now i got to reconnect the wires, and wait for the boards too cool down long enough for me to touch them." he apologized, and walked back to the "man cave." Any notes about your characters: is twins with samuel cildechon.
Name: samuel cildechon the 2nd Age:15 Gender:male Eyes:left eye is white, right eye is cyan Hair: purple Height: 5"5 Body Type:average Skin Color: caucasion God Parent: chione Mortal Parent: samuel cildechon Country of Origin: america Pets: siberian husky named cyanette Talents: can ride a skate board decently, is very active. Weapon**: Katen Kyōkotsu (dual swords) both CB Flaws: cant do anything without auron, since they are inseparable. is not very knowledgeable. arrogant. Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): can freeze water as he steps on it, he can only do it 5 times a day, he can only do it once every hour, and as he steps off of a certain area of water, it melts behind him, also, he can only walk out 60 ft. so if he reaches his limit, his brother needs to come out and save him, or someone who has the ability to lift him, off the water and bring him back to shore. when he and aaron are together, they can make an island of ice out in the middle of a body of water, it can only be less than 6ft, by 6ft, and they can only do this once a day, and it can stay built for up to a whole day, but if they keep it up for a whole day, they cant do it for 3 days as penalty for abuse of powers. Life Before CHB*: life was a box of choclates according to samuel, he loved life, he had women all over him his entire life. he was of course the favorite by his father. his twin brother, auron, was a computer nerd. their father, samuel the 1st, taught him to be a cool and active boy when he was 6, as a gift for his 7th birhtday, and he taught auron to be a computer whiz as his gift.
samuel loved this, he was well respected and treated nicely, no matter how bad he messed up. one day, while he and his brother were hanging out in the lake, he made a bet that he could stand on water for 5 seconds, and auron said that he could stand on water for 10 seconds. they both shook hands, and walked out on to the lake, where they stood there, standing on ice, but it was the middle of july, which means the ice wouldn't be there. it was then when they realized that they had, as auron called it, "super natural powers." RP Example*: i was sitting in the "man cave" playing video games, when my father walked in and asked, "hey son, can i play with you?" i nodded and set his dad up on the game with him, we played for a bit, beating each other at every turn. finally his dad, stood up and said, "you are still the best at this stuff. haha." i laughed and said "i learned it from you dad." his father walked out and went to the other room, to sit in his lazy chair and sleep. samuel continued playing for a while Any notes about your characters: is twins with auron cildechon
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:20 pm | |
| How much water can they freeze? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | syn-aaron Dedicated Member

 Number of posts: 1682 Age: 16 Registration date: 2012-01-30
 | Subject: Re: syn-aaron's characters Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:25 pm | |
| on which power? the island, or when they walk, or what? they cant freeze water any other way. |
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