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Post by Nemesis on 7/7/2012, 4:22 am

Name: Tora Wars
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Eyes: red
Hair: brown
Height: 6'1
Body Type: muscular but sorta scronny at the same time
Skin Color: light tan
God Parent: Irene, Goddess of peace
Mortal Parent: Moris Wars
Country of Origin: Phoenix Arizona
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Talents: retaining peace among riots, second personality is superb at fighting.
Weapon**: A 3 foot long morning star staff that helps him retain his power
Flaws: too nice, takes no ones side unless one side is peaceful, double personality normally gets the best of him when unexpected, his first personality hates fighting, his second personality loves fighting.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):He can convince others to forget anything violent, when he does this it's like a very convincing peaceful voice in the personas head trying to remove their violent actions temporarily, he can do this 6 times a day.Once every day he can slam down his staff and remove conflict, violence, rash actions, and evilness from an area within a 10 yard radius, when he does this he passes out for about a day or two.
Life Before CHB*:In his before life, he was known as a son of Ares named Stross, but was tragically killed by a daughter of Hestia who betrayed him for treasure.When he decided to be reborn he had a lot of things on his mind that he would soon forget so he prayed that the new him would find a friend/brother he had met as a spirit.When he was reborn he became a peace loving boy named Tora, but a small factor of himself had made it to rebirth, and that became his alter ego who loved to fight.Tora grew up with his father in a small town in Arizona, which he loved a lot.Tora looked a lot like his past self, except for his attire and build.Tora was trained in the art of fighting without fighting and his mothers side helped a lot with that.Tora was told by his father one day about his mothers side and his powers so He sent Tora to camp half blood.
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by Chuck on 7/7/2012, 2:09 pm

I don't think "scronny" is a word.

What in the world is that pet supposed to be? Usually we only allow real pets.

Please elaborate on the second personality. Normally when someone has split personality disorder (or the like), it's because of some traumatic event and the alternate personalities come out in certain situations to protect the main personality. Very often the main personality doesn't know the other personalitie(s), but usually the other personalitie(s) know the main and each other. Do a bit of research, please, before you do elaborate. In fact, I recommend you have some sort of other form or something for the other personality.

Hating and loving fighting aren't exactly flaws.

His powerss waaay too much power-play/god-modding. I don't believe there is a way to fully take away someone's evil intentions, even for a brief period.
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by Nemesis on 7/7/2012, 6:10 pm

The pet is a cross between a dog and dove

If so, they are able to resist, so it would be more like a peaceful voice to convince them to forget.

by that I mean his first personality never fights, but his second personality loves fighting much more then anybody normally would.
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by nix on 7/7/2012, 6:28 pm

No to the pet.
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by Nemesis on 7/7/2012, 6:36 pm

ok then, no pet
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by nix on 7/7/2012, 6:42 pm

So...your character is bipolar?
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by Nemesis on 7/7/2012, 6:50 pm

not really, he just has two personalities, one is peaceful and one is violent, but he is still himself none the less.
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Post by Chuck on 7/7/2012, 7:28 pm

Is the two personalities an actual split-personality where each personality is completely divided from the other and has separate control at separate times, or are they just mood swings?
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Post by Nemesis on 7/7/2012, 8:29 pm

The first one you said, they are completely divided.
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by nix on 7/7/2012, 8:40 pm

er...how is his flaw too nice, if his other personality loves fighting?
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Post by Nemesis on 7/7/2012, 8:41 pm

he has two personalities, each one has different flaws
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Post by nix on 7/7/2012, 8:49 pm

So he's not so good at fighting with his more nicer/calmer personality?
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by Nemesis on 7/7/2012, 8:50 pm

he doesn't and will not fight with his first personality
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Post by Chuck on 7/7/2012, 8:52 pm

Is there something in particular that triggers the second personality coming out? Or is it just random?
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Post by Kendall on 7/7/2012, 8:53 pm

I'm going to suggest that you make a description of the two personalities in his notes, Eric, because otherwise this will get confusing.

Also, Eric. Saying that he can remove evil/violent ambitions is pretty much suppressing part of a person's personality/actions, which would not be allowed. Also, can you elaborate more on the second power -- does it stop any fighting currently going on? What do you mean by removing rash actions and evil?
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Post by nix on 7/7/2012, 8:54 pm

What if someone attacked him? Will he even fight then, or will it switch to the more aggressive side? Does he know that he has these two personalities?
"Tora was trained in the art of fighting without fighting and his mothers side helped a lot with that"
How was he trained in the art of fighting..without..fighting?
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by Nemesis on 7/7/2012, 8:59 pm

He has a suspicion but not exactly, when some one attacks him he just tries to convince them violence is not the answer and such, he will block if he needs to but not fight.
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Post by nix on 7/7/2012, 9:01 pm

Pabu wrote:
"Tora was trained in the art of fighting without fighting and his mothers side helped a lot with that"
How was he trained in the art of fighting..without..fighting?
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Re: Tora wars(wip)

Post by Nemesis on 7/7/2012, 9:07 pm

I had said earlier for his first power that it can be resisted since it's just like making a peaceful voice convince there mind for a while.

and trained of the art of fighting without fighting is just fancy talk for meditation and convincing others in a peaceful manner.

and I will kenny, still thinking it out.
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Post by nix on 7/7/2012, 9:08 pm

So...he can't actually fight physically?
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Post by Chuck on 7/7/2012, 9:09 pm

Elleon wrote:Is there something in particular that triggers the second personality coming out? Or is it just random?

Aka, convenient times of your choice?
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Post by Kendall on 7/7/2012, 9:10 pm

Well, Eric, if that's the way it's supposed to be, then you'd better phrase it that way in your form; it sounds like you're suppressing a personality/action in your form.
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