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Post by kkayx on 6/26/2013, 2:21 pm

Name: Skye Kayz
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: amber
Hair: straight golden
Height: 5 feet
Body Type: thin and lean
Skin Color: tan
Mother: Aphrodite
Father: UNKNOWN (was a street child)
Country of Origin: USA
Talents: singing, art, perfecting
Weapon**: two Celestial bronze daggers
Flaws: not sitting still, no sadness, no pessimistic attitude
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can make people fall in love with others or her, she can only do this three times a day. The love lasts for 1-2 hours. Skye has to be at least a yard away from the victim, and he or she has to be an ascendant of Aphrodite to resist.
Life Before CHB: Skye was a street kid, not knowing where to go, or what do to. She was always begging, running away from monsters, or just simply staring at the sky. All she had left was hope, or nothing else. Sometimes Skye went to sleep hungry. Other times she was forced by monsters to not rest.
RP Example*: Skye looked behind her, and saw that the monsters were gaining on her. She looked ahead of herself, and saw that a giant mass of mountains and rivers. I have no choice. She thought to herself. Skye zoomed up the moor, and saw a tree and some cabins there. She could stay in one, if they were abandoned. While she was thinking, the monsters tackled her to the ground and clawed and bit at her. Skye screamed, desperately trying to kick them away, but they all rolled down the hill. She forced herself to get up, and her vision was blurry now. All she saw were the monsters trying to get in where she was and her arms and legs gushing blood. Skye fell to the ground. Everything went black.
Any notes about your character: loves smiles and laughter.
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Re: Skye Kayz

Post by Kendall on 6/26/2013, 2:35 pm

The Legacy form is for the Romans only; if you want to keep this form Roman you'll have to change Aphrodite to Venus. I don't think we allow Greek legacies.

We only allow Celestial bronze for CHB kids (Stygian iron for Underworld kids only) and Imperial gold for CJ kids, not silver.

Add two more flaws.

Life Before CHB must be at least five sentences long, so you need to add two more sentences or so.
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Post by kkayx on 6/26/2013, 2:46 pm

I changed it.
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Post by Keena on 6/26/2013, 6:45 pm

You should remove the lagacy of field in this form.
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Re: Skye Kayz

Post by kkayx on 6/27/2013, 10:11 am

Oh okay sorry.
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Post by Christian on 6/27/2013, 10:56 am

Charmspeak isn't allowed
I do not understand the flaw "sitting still". Are you saying that she's lazy, or she just sits in one place everyday and doesn't move at all?
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Post by kkayx on 6/27/2013, 11:47 am

But.. then what's allowed.
And the "sitting still" flaw ....
I meant to put she can't sit still
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Post by Kendall on 6/27/2013, 1:20 pm

Well, Aphrodite kids can make people fall in love with him/her or other people.
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Post by kkayx on 6/27/2013, 1:24 pm

Oh okay thanks. Sorry...
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Post by kkayx on 6/27/2013, 1:25 pm

I changed it.
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Post by Kendall on 6/27/2013, 1:34 pm

Please don't double-post.

How many times a day can she use that power? How long does the love last, and how far can she be st most from each victim in order to use her power?
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Post by kkayx on 6/27/2013, 2:53 pm

Oh sorry about that....
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Post by Kendall on 6/27/2013, 7:14 pm

Having the love last forever is not allowed; I think the most allowed would be 1-2 hours.
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Post by kkayx on 6/27/2013, 7:31 pm

Oh okay sorry again.
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Post by Kendall on 6/27/2013, 7:41 pm

How far away at most can she be from the victim(s) in order to use her power? How can they resist?
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Post by kkayx on 6/27/2013, 10:37 pm

Okay done..
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Post by Kendall on 6/27/2013, 10:40 pm

I think you'll need something more wide-ranging than being descended from Aphrodite for resistance -- for example, having a strong will or knowing what she's doing.
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Post by Morgan Landry on 6/28/2013, 7:57 am

Isn't manipulation of emotions forbidden as powers?
What do you mean by perfecting and how is it a talent?

If she loves smile and laughter, how can she be pessimistic?
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