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Post by Azailia Grace on 7/29/2014, 1:14 pm

Name:Azailia grace
Age:13
Gender:girl
Eyes:hazel
Hair:blonde
Height:4ft 3
Body Type:short
Skin Color:whitish tan
God Parent:zues
Mortal Parent:amilia grace
Country of Origin:U.S.A
Pets:dogs hank and copper
Talents:zapping, punching, and awesomeness
Weapon**:sword
Personality:kind, brave
Flaws:too stubborn and arrogant.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):lightning
Life Before Camp*:normal, good
RP Example*:I ran through the forrest, not starring to look back, for the beast was no ordinary beast. It was the minitour. The half man half bull ran to cards need with striking speed. Ahead I saw the border of the camp I belong to.
Any notes about your characters:never not epic

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Post by Morgan Landry on 7/29/2014, 1:19 pm

Hi!

∆ Zeus is not allowed as a god parent (unless you win him in a mystery box or a contest) so please change the god parent :)

∆ What do you mean by zapping?

∆ Awesomeness is not a talent ^.^ it's subjective.

∆ I believe her sword is celestial bronze?

∆ You need two lines for the personality section c:

∆ You need three flaws.

∆ Please develop on her powers once you changed the god parent :3

∆ You need 5 sentences for life before Camp Half-Blood. Explain how she got to Camp, and such ^.^

∆ Seeing her last name is Grace, I gotta ask, is she somehow linked to Thalia?

The rest looks good :)
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Post by Azailia Grace on 7/29/2014, 1:42 pm

Name:Azailia grace
Age:13
Gender:girl
Eyes:hazel
Hair:blonde
Height:4ft 3
Body Type:stubby
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:hecate
Mortal Parent:Don grace
Country of Origin:U.S.A.
Pets:dogs copper and hank
Talents: she is good at acting. She can deceive anyone. She is verry good at telling when people lie.
Weapon**:celestial bronze sword
Personality:she is kind. She defends others when they are hurt. She hates bullies, and will do
Anything to stop them. She loves to make people laugh. She is sweet and funny. She is never grunpy
Flaws:stubborn, not a verry good fighter. She is too kind sometines.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):creating lightning and fire with her mind. She can also change the mist at will. Her powers rely on her energy.
Life Before Camp*:she had a wonderful life. She wrote a book. She ran away because her
Fathers girlfriend was terrible to her. She was chased by a minitour to camp. The minitour waits for a chance
To kill her.
RP Example*:I ran, not starring to look back, for the beast was worse than anything
I had ever faced. Up ahead i saw the border of my home. The camp half blood sign swung above my head as I entered. Why was it chasing me? I attracted it away from a demigod, by killing it, and now he wants revenge.
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Post by Azailia Grace on 7/29/2014, 1:43 pm

And, yes, Thalia is her verry distant cousin.

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Post by Morgan Landry on 7/29/2014, 1:52 pm

Hey again :)

∆ You don't need to re-post your form, you can just click on the 'edit' button in the top right corner of your post :) Also, please don't double post

∆ It's a celestial bronze sword right? (You forgot to say sword).

∆ Please state talents that have nothing to do with her powers c:

∆ When I said you need two lines I didn't mean as in, two sentences ^.^ please elaborate a bit more on her personality.

∆ For her powers: how many times a day can she use them? How big would the maximum fire be, and what would be the strength of the most powerful lightning bolt she could summon?

∆ Why did the Minotaur chase her to Camp? Did she stumble upon it or did demigods/satyrs run to her help?

∆ Family ties with canon characters aren't allowed, so Thalia can't be her cousin.

The rest is good, thanks for editing :)

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Post by Madiisawriterdancer on 8/2/2015, 3:00 pm

Name: Cassandra Gruss
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown
Height:5'4
Body Type:AB
Skin Color: White but tan
God Parent: Hermes
Mortal Parent: Laney Gruss
Country of Origin:USA
Pets: Dog named Rox
Talents: Archery, Fighting, dancing, singing, theft
Weapon**: Bow and arrow named Elpida kai yperifaneia (In English means Hope and Pride)
Personality: Funny, nice, sarcastic, joyful, friendly
Flaws: to loyal, prideful, dosen't know when shes crossed the line
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): theft, nimble, fast, street smart, cunning,
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): versatile in many skills, sense and pick locks
Life Before Camp*: worked at a bakery because her mom couldnt pay for the house on her own.
RP Example*: as herself
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Post by Morgan Landry on 8/2/2015, 3:28 pm

Hey Madi!

Please create a separate topic for your character form :) Just click the "New topic" button, copy-paste the form in and hit send.
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