Branden Miller - Hermes WIP

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Branden Miller - Hermes WIP

Post by PandaCubNinja on 3/26/2015, 4:27 pm

Demigod Form:
Name: Paris Branden Miller (goes by his middle name)
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Eyes: Hazel
Hair: Red
Height: 5'6"
Body Type: Slim, athletic
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Hermes
Mortal Parent: Audrey Miller
Country of Origin: Ireland
Pets: Black cat named Chimney
Talents: Sarcasm, comedy, diplomacy, macgyvering, swordsmanship, pick pocketing, lock picking, Martial arts
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze Dagger
Personality: Paris is mischievous and a troublemaker, always playing pranks on various people, sometimes not knowing when to stop. He is also charming and very persuasive, as well as sly. He is always quick with a joke and loves a good laugh, he knows how to keep the mood positive.
Flaws:
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional):

- Super speed: He is a very fast runner and can reach speeds of up to 25 mph.

Powers (must relate to god parent; optional):

- Lock Control: As a son of Hermes, he can open locks and sense the inner mechanisms of locks, as well as sensing and dispelling enchantments on locks.

- Limited Mist Control: He was taught by Chiron to be able to slightly manipulate the mist, he is able to easily trick the minds of mortals and sometimes monsters.

Life Before Camp*:
RP Example*:
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Re: Branden Miller - Hermes WIP

Post by StarCat42 on 3/29/2015, 9:08 pm

Hi Branden!

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Re: Branden Miller - Hermes WIP

Post by Morgan Landry on 4/1/2015, 3:23 pm

Hi there!

(StarCat, only staff people are allowed to post on somepony's character form ^^)

→ The ability you listed is a power. Please put it in the powers section and add limits : for how many posts can he hold that speed? How many posts cool down does he need? Also 25 mph isn't much for super speed... you sure you don't wanna bump it up a little?
→ On a scale of one to ten where one is the normal lock you find on doors and ten is the super well guarded thing protecting nuclear missiles, what would be the maximum lock he could pick?
→ Add limits to the powers :)
→ What's the maximum he could do with the Mist manipulation?
→ You still need to fill out the Life Before Camp and Roleplay Example parts.

Rest looks good to me, nice job!
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Re: Branden Miller - Hermes WIP

Post by PandaCubNinja on 4/15/2015, 2:27 am

Ok, thanks, I know I need to fill out the rest. And the speed thing I will bump up, in the character powers topic I seem to remember a post about 25 mph being the limit, but if you allow more I will definitely change it ^_^. Thanks for your comments, I'll add more as soon as I get the time.

Time...what is time? I have a lot going on right now, so time isn't really in my vocabulary at the moment, what is this magical thing called time that I have very little of? ^_^

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Re: Branden Miller - Hermes WIP

Post by Kwacken on 4/17/2015, 5:34 pm

Moving to WIP section.
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Re: Branden Miller - Hermes WIP

Post by PandaCubNinja on 4/18/2015, 2:36 am

Ok

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