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Post by jake. on 4/2/2015, 12:10 pm

phoenix kair tanaka // seventeen // son of makaria



Name: phoenix kair tanaka

Age: seventeen.

Gender: asexual male.

Eyes: as black as his soul.

Hair: when ungelled: long, shaggy fairly straight. always gelled, however. always. occasionally he wears a bandana.

Height: six foot two.

Body Type: tall, intimidating, lanky, athletic. high stamina and cardiovascular endurance, aswell as high speed, agility and strength. strong jawline, long, legs with visible sinew and muscle, thin, skilled hands and long fingers.

Skin Color: pale.

God Parent: makaria, goddess of blessed death.

Mortal Parent: oikawa tanaka.

Country of Origin: born in japan.

Pets: black german sheppard named castor. well trained, good mannered, patient.

Talents:
+manipulating.
+lying.
+skilled with most weapons.
+smart, sly and a great strategist.

Weapon**:
+ kira; kira, meaning killer in japanese is a three foot long stygian iron sword with japanese flower designs and symbols carved into the blade.


Personality: phoenix is generally not a nice person; he's sarcastic,  and his mood can vary between easy to get annoyed and make him lash out and snarl at you, all the way to keeping his cool completely and ignoring you. there's no inbetween. phoenix is a complete arse to children; he hates them with a passion, even though he has a little brother. he can't stand the sun, he prefers to stay in darker places; but at the same time -- he hates being too cold. he gives only a very limited amount of people his complete trust; something not even his own father has achieved.  phoenix will always go to his limits for what he wants; and to protect the two or three people he gave his reliance. he has a very dark kind of humour, and he looks down on people that haven't got as much money as him.

Flaws:
+unkind, dismissive.
+coulrophobia // fear of clowns
+greedy
+power-seeking, rude to others who have the same goal as him
+rebellious

Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional):
+can talk to ghosts and spirits
+can sense dead bodies that received blessed death

Powers (must relate to god parent; optional):
+ can summon two spirits of blessed death//from the isles of the blest per day. can talk to them for six posts, and has to wait thirteen posts before summoning another one.

Life Before Camp*: phoenix was born in japan in 1998, living there until his sixteenth birthday. phoenix and his brother makao hated their father, as he had abused makao multiple times, and hit phoenix and his step-mother haia. haia left before makao was born, so oikawa let out his frustration and anger on makao. after returning from a school trip r, phoenix murdered his father brutally, running away before the police could find him. a satyr arrived a few hours later. phoenix teased and angered him, until the satyr left a few days, only to return later on. the satyr asked him if he'd been witnessing some paranormal things, and phoenix answered; "i can see them. ghosts." after that, they travelled to america, only to be chased by a hellhound right before they arrived. phoenix was welcomed, but he didn't care much. he snapped at everyone, pushed them around, commanded them to do things for him.

RP Example*: phoenix stared at his father. his short, buzz cut hair had began to grow out, but phoenix still shaved it at the sides. oikawa snarled. "so, was the school trip fun?" phoenix reached up an touched his bloody nose. oikawa's fist met with phoenix's jaw and pain shot up and down his mouth and shoulders. phoenix stood up from the table, hands shivering, unclenching and clenching again. he reached out slowly for the kitchen knife infront of him, smiling. "oh, boy, it was fun." and then he let the knife fly.

Any notes about your characters: no faceclaim yet. portrayed by random guy from google.


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Post by Kwacken on 4/3/2015, 4:00 pm

* Sunappu - Can you explain why only Phoenix can weild this weapon? If he drops it while it is in it's full hammer form, could another person use it? I need more details on this. Most weapons are not a single person weilder.

* The minimum age for enlistment in the Japanese Maritime Self Defense Force, and any branch of the Japanese Self Defense Force is 18. I do not believe they have an early entry program like the US.

* Even if he were in the JMSDF, he would be contractually obligated to stay in Japan and fulfill his enlistment contract, which runs longer than a year.

* Can you explain to me the difference between a blessed death and a non blessed death? Is it someone who died peacefully? Or someone who was then sent to the isles of the blessed? I'm afraid we are at a disadvantage with Malaria, as there is very little written on her and is debated on the use of euphemisms.
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Post by jake. on 4/4/2015, 4:19 am

okay, to make things easier, i got rid of his hammer and edited the japanese navy thing to a fun school trip. yay!

someone who receives blessed death gets sent either a: to elysium or b: to the isles of the blest. they get sent there because they either a: they chose to relive their life three times after dunking themselves in the river lethe and try to achieve elysium three times (after that, they achieve going to the isles of the blest) or b: they get sent to elysium because they did good in their life. they helped old women across the street, (.P.) helped baby sea lions and made sure all freshly hatched baby turtles made it into the ocean. stuff like that.

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Post by Kwacken on 4/4/2015, 8:23 am

* Talent of skilled with most weapons. There are literally thousands of different types of weapons. Ares/Mars/Bellona/insert-war-god-here kids can have skill or talent with most weapons as an ability from their godparent. Being a child of the underworld, there is no reason for Phoenix to be skilled with most weapons. Please narrow down what type of weapon to 2-3 and explain how he became proficient with them. Example: Joe Schmuckatelli learned how to shoot a rifle during his time at the military boarding school.

* The murder of Mr. Tanaka is bothering me. Can you please expound more on why Phoenix killed him? Yes, he was abusive, but most abused children do not kill their fathers unless they have other mental issues, or in self-defense. This looked like coldblooded murder.

* Can you expound on how Phoenix left Japan? It is implied by your form that the police suspected him as the murderer, so flight and most public transit would be nearly impossible.
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