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Jayse Draak

Post by Canine on 11/27/2016, 8:02 pm

Name: Jayse Draak, Jayse is prounounced like Jace. Sometimes the Gods refer to him as the Beast Hunter
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Eyes: He has brown eyes, and one of them is missing. He covers it by a old leather eyepatch
Hair: His hair is simi-short, it is so brightly colored its almost white
Height: 5'5
Body Type: Visibly Muscular, most say something about his body when describing him
Skin Color: Olive
Apparel: He has Snakebite piercings, his boyfriend did them. When he is wearing casual clothes, he wears shorts and Band Hoodies. He almost always wears beanies.
God Parent: Eris
Mortal Parent: Garth Draak
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: When he was born Eris sent a snake to protect Jayse, he named it Vile.
Talents: Bomb-Making, Making Poisons and Medicines, Making Weapons, and Killing Things.
Weapon: He can make these smoke bombs that release purple colored smoke, they can fill a small room. He carries two CB Sickles named "Doom and Gloom" he made them especially to kill monsters.
Personality: He's gay and he feel he shouldn't have to say anything about it. He used to be a psychotic a-hole, but he is trying to change that stigma and redeem himself. He has great leadership skills, but do to some incidents he doesn't like to be the head or lead anything. Sometimes he can't help himself and creates chaos and sadness for others, but he is trying to hold back. A demigod named Wraith, who is also his boyfriend, cools him down. He tries to act happy and smile a lot but sometimes he can't
Flaws: Relentless, Socially Awkward, Unforgiving, Horizontal Scar across his right cheek.  
Abilities: He can detect feelings of violence in others. He is immune to Toxins and cannot be Poisoned
Powers: None
Life Before Camp: When his brother died long before he was born, his father searched for a way to bring him back. He was so deep in misery and insanity he drew the attention of the Goddess of Chaos and Strife, and they fell in love. Then Jayse was born, as a parting gift she gave Jayse's father the location to the underworld. Jayse was brought along on his voyage, his father got in the underworld but he was mauled by Cerberus and Jayse was left all alone. So a demigod was sent to retrieve him and brought him to CHB when he was only 3, he is 13 now.  
RP Example: Jayse walked in the door of Wraith's Grandma's House. Wraith jumped up and ran over to hug him, when he did Wraith's familly's eyes grew wide and their jaws dropped. Wraith grabbed Jayse's hand and sat him down beside him. Jayse didn't know what to do he smiled, and Wraith introduced him as his BOYFRIEND.
Any notes about your characters:  He is obviously in a relationship with Wraith. He hunts beasts all the time,
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Re: Jayse Draak

Post by Kendall on 12/17/2016, 12:58 am

Akhlys is a Protogenos/primoridal goddess, so she wouldn't be allowed as a god parent. Please change it and all the references to her that wouldn't transfer over with whatever new god parent you'll pick.
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Re: Jayse Draak

Post by Canine on 12/18/2016, 6:01 pm

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Post by Kendall on 12/21/2016, 11:20 pm

... Why would the gods nickname him The Beast Hunter? Plenty of demigods do that.

I'm gonna say no to Eris sending a snake to him when he was a kid; you aren't allowed to have gods contact your character before camp (and even then, you'd need an admin's permission).

Talents:
- How effective are these bombs?
- How bad are his poisons?

Abilities:
- He can specifically sense violence? Or just chaotic feelings?
- I don't think Eris is specifically a goddess of poison/toxins so I'm gonna say no to this. Abilities must relate to the god's realm of power/symbols.

LBC:
- I'm gonna say no to Eris telling Jayse's dad where the Underworld is.
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