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Einua, Son of Bia.

Post by EinuaDarling on 7/11/2017, 1:23 am


((EDITED AGAIN))
Name: Einua Verui

Gender: Male

Mortal Parent: Arrin Verui, a man of integrity and great willpower, although he was just a simple carpenter. He was in einua’s life until he was 13. He died of a heart attack on Einua’s thirteenth birthday.

God Parent:Bia (goddess of force)

Date of Birth: Sep/26/1999(17)

Place of Birth:Oregon/ portland.

Hometown/Last Residence:Oregon/ mcminnville

Race/ethnicity: Caucasian

Accent: A tad scotish.

Skin Tone:Pale white, with freckles spockling forearms and cheeks.

Eye Color:Bright green, with gold flecks. Looks like waves made of leaves.

Hair Color: Black

Hair Length: Curly, down to his thighs.

Height: 5,2

Weight:130 pounds

Body Type:Feminine.(he looks like a girl with wide hips, but no boobs. Cus well, yeah hes a guy.)

Appearance:

((ill draw him eventually)) Einua has a very feminine figure. A jaw dropping visage, with soft high cheeks. Almond shaped eyes, that are slightly curved. A button nose, and Pouty lips tinged pink with freckles dotting his entire face, especially around his nose and brows. He doesn't have much muscle to show off, although he does have muscle; it’s just lean muscle. His mid section curves in as he has a thing waist, and then broadens out into shapely hips. His thighs are large and at first glance look soft and jiggly, but albeit they are quite muscular. Still looks rather feminine. Has a heavy scar running along the ridge of his back. Looks like branching lightning.

Weapon: A celestial bronze scythe.

Armor:(none yet?)

Pet(s): A red factory canarie, his name is Dex.

Skills/Talents:~Einua has somewhat a grasp on art.
~He also spent years focusing on his hearing while meditating, thus he can usually determine where a sound comes from, and hear things normal people usually don't notice.
~He has wonderful eye hand coordination as well.

Flaws:
~Einua is a bit more than just a klutz, he tends to fall over almost anything, drops things that are in his hands if he becomes focused on something.
~Einua has trouble processing emotions and sometimes dissociates from not understanding others and why they do certain things. As well as a slight case of schizophrenia.(although this is not considered a flaw, he still has it)
~Einua never really learned math, his father never taught him how to do algebra. thus he has a very hard time ever understanding it.
~Einua has extreme anxiety, its hard for him to keep his mind focused on one thing at a time, his thoughts are always floating around, and a finger is always tapping against something, because of this he will usually say "what was that" or "say that again" when he is listening to someone talk.
~Einua has a strong stutter as well, he got this once he learned what his voice could do, the fear from his own voice caused the stutter, which isn't that strong. but notiveable.
~
Trigger warning:
Einua has self harm scars all along his thighs, over 200 of them to be exact.

Strengths:~Einua has trouble not acting when he sees something going wrong, it's like hero aspect. If he sees anyone in trouble, his body just moves before he can even think about what he is doing, it tends to get him in trouble though.
~Einua is rarely ever sad or angry, he tends to see these emotions as useless, and as a child he chose to cast these emotions aside, bottling them up. Sometimes they explode out.((again not exactly a strength but still.))

Weaknesses: ~If Einua becomes afraid, he will cry uncontrollably and shutdown. unable to really move or interact with anything.
~Einua is afraid of dark places and cramped spaces, he has extreme claustrophobia.
~einua is also afraid of very loud noises, and sudden movements.

Likes:~Einua likes any kind of gummy candy, rainy days while he sits under a tree, reading books; and the stars.

Dislikes:People who get angry to easily, and people who stare to long at him. He hates spicy food and anyone who trys to force feed spicy food to him. Hot weather and muggy days.

Fears:The dark, lightning. And needles.

Personality:Einua is a quiet boy, who tends to leave a lonely life. Trying his best to stay out of people's way and out of their hair. Although, something inside of him always pushes him to act whenever he hears someone cry or sees someone in trouble or need. He is a listener, tending to wait until the conversation dies down to speak up or give his piece of the conversation. The subjects he usually chooses to talk about or ones he feels strongly about, and his opinion is usually or never moved by another. He truly yearns to have friends and have someone to love, but his past has taught him to be wary and afraid of such emotions. Emotions that can be broken so easily.

Abilities:

~Forceful Presence: coming from his mother directly, he may be short, but whenever he is in battle enemies seem to target him, as if he is the most threatening. Although sometimes enemies will flee due to this, terrified of his presence. It makes animals rather docile around him, and humans tend to steer clear of or don't even notice him because of it, as if their gaze is being forced away from him.

~Compulsive nature: this one is a bit more simple, if something is coming at or towards him, and the object/person is aiming or headed to hit him. His body moves on its own to get out of the way. This doesnt work with anything that moves faster than 50 mph. For he can only move up to those speeds in bursts.

Powers:
~The Force/Power of Bia: Einua enters a state where one or all of his muscles have drastically increased strength and stamina, depending on how much these aspects increase he will have to wait a certain amount of time or his body sustains a certain amount of harm(this is going to take a while to explain.)
Now let's start with one or two muscles. At normal he can lift 150 pounds with his arms and 250 with his legs. First stage of this power would Times that by 1.5. So he would be able to lift 225 pounds with his arms, and 375 pounds with his legs. This would take four posts to use again. Although if he tries to use it again his muscle tears, or the bone that is covered in the muscle used is bruised. Second stage would by times 2, so 300 with his arms, and 500 with his legs. This would take 5 posts to recharge. If he uses this again. The bone that is accompanied with the muscle used breaks. And the last stage for singular muscles. Which is times 5 of the original amount, so for example he would be able to lift with his arms 750 pounds and his legs would be able to lift 1250. (now he's not just able to lift or carry objects with this, he's able to apply that much force to them) this would take 15 posts to be able to do again. If he uses it again right after, the bone and muscle is turned to fragments, broken beyond repair basically. Unless divine intervention maybe??
Now to full body use. When he activates all of his muscles with this power, his strength and stamina is X10(including his speed, at which he can run up to speeds of 60-90 mph,This can only be used once per topic. if he tries to use it again, he will go into a coma. Either or become handicapped.((this power can not be used
in stages one after another. he has to wait for the cool down phase to use any of them again))

Force pulse: Einua is able to yell out or scream out force, this can be used in other body parts, example he can use his hands and clap them together. Or stomp on the ground. The force yell is able to push back anything below 50 pounds 200ft, 100 pounds 100ft, 150 pounds 50ft. Force clap, shatters glass within a 70 ft. Bursts eardrums of anyone within 5 ft, unless their hands are covering their ears. Force stomp can break or shatter anything weaker than concrete. All of these take 8 posts to cool down. And it takes about 2-3 posts to use one after the other. if he uses them all in succession. it takes 10 posts to cool down.

~Compulsive force: Einua is able to lift, crush, push or pull, with his mind. Anything that weighs 1-100 pounds and has a fairly minimal density(example of minimal density, glass has very minimal density and so does wood), he can lift, push or pull up to 500ft away from him, as well as crush it into a ball quite easily. This takes 2-3 posts to recharge. Anything that weighs from 100-200 pounds and has a medium density(example of medium density. concrete) he can lift, push or pull up to 300 ft away from him, he can squeeze and crack anything at this weight/density. This takes 5-6 posts to recharge. Anything that weighs from 200-1000 pounds and has a high density)example of high density, iron/steel) he can lift, push or pull up to 100 ft away from him, as well as slightly crack(if at all) and rustle around. This takes 10 posts to recharge. (he has to be within 50 feet of this object to use this ability on it, if its any further then that. it wont work.)

((that's all the powers for now. May add more at a later date if thats ok?))


Social Status:Einua was the black sheep, always in the back of the class and one that was unnoticed.

Summer or Year Rounder: Year rounder( he has nowhere else to go, his father died)

Years at Camp:one

Life Before Camp:1-5: Einua grew up a bit oddly as a child, as usual most babies look quite androgynous, einua on the other hand always seemed even more feminine than most. As he was growing up other adults and children made fun of him for it. This distanced him from people and caused einua to stray from people and stay by himself to escape such behavior, his father tended to be always busy. But any time Arrin had free time he would spend it with einua, reading him folklore and teaching him how to meditate. This caused einua to be more focused than most toddlers, and his attentive attitude pushed him away from others even further.
5-10: Deciding it was best for einua to be taught at home rather than going to school and being tormented, Arrin started to lean off of work and care and teach Einua. Because of this most of Einua’s days were spent studying and learning, and nights reading books and staying up late watching the stars. With time his body became even more feminine, and his hair grew at extraordinary speeds. Although einua had started to notice his father would hide certain things from him, some of Arrins notebooks would be locked up, and one of the rooms in the house always had a padlock on it, one day he had found the door open, and had taken a peek inside. All he could catch a glimpse of before the door slammed closed from his father's hand slamming down on the wooden surface, was a picture of his father, and of a strong and bold looking women. whose face he couldn't quite make out.
10-15: as einua grew, his father found it increasingly difficult to keep einua inside. And contained. Teaching him became a tad bit more difficult, as well as keeping child services away. Although on einua’s thirteenth birthday, Arrin passed away from a heart attack, which during the moment. All Einua could do was try to resuscitate his father and call 9-11.
15-18: In this time of Einua’s life, everything passed by rather quickly, being confused as a girl as he switched from house to house of his relatives and eventually adopted families became a normal. Harassment was an everyday thing, and pushed einua further into dissociation. At one point while he was sixteen, an older gentleman tried to force himself onto einua. As he attempted to get away, he was claimed by his goddess. In the moment he had been using his back to push away from the man, and unknowing of his powers his body went into overdrive. The force caused muscles in his back to rip and break in a rapid manner, that left a scar like lightning had ripped through his back. He had gone into a coma at this point, and later woke up at camp half blood, two years having passed since his him going into a coma.(side note of dex) Dex had been with him once he awoke and never left his side since.((also einua is bisexual))

Role-playing Example: A soft whistle of breathe left Einua’s soft pursue lips, the sounds rippled through the air and seemed to shake the house and the bed he was currently laying ontop of. His thighs shook gently, short shorts pressing tightly against his upper thighs, high thigh socks tugging tightly against the rest of his legs. Colored black with white stripes leading up. Cocking his head to his side, black curls flitted and fell into his visage as his hair fell over and along the side of the bed, the sound of a whine emanating from his chest echoed out into the room. And in response His fox dex [rancing down onto Einua’s small chest, talons gently bracing again the boys silky skin, freckled with light brown dots, the crow nuzzled into the boy's chest warmly “...thanks dex, i needed that”
Notes:His father had a heavy scottish accent, this caused Einua to have one as well.


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Re: Einua, Son of Bia.

Post by Morgan Landry on 7/11/2017, 1:13 pm

Hi!

- If he's from Oregon, how come he has a Scottish accent?
- Ravens count as exotic pets, please edit.
- His hand-eye coordination kind of clashes with his first flaw.
- You need 5 personality flaws for a detailed form. (Schizophrenia does not count)
- Crying isn't necessarily a sign of weakness.
- In how far is his 1st ability related to Bia? Powers and abilities have to relate to the god parent.
- Reduce the power of the force clap/shout by about a 3rd please
- His last power is basically telekinesis, right?

Rest looks good :)

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Re: Einua, Son of Bia.

Post by EinuaDarling on 7/11/2017, 3:03 pm

He has a Scottish accent because he grew up around his father who mainly has a Scottish accent. Ill add that in as a detail, so it does not seem so outlandish.
Yes that was the point; he may be good at it, but he's clumsy. its supposed to be silly.
Schizophrenia doesn't count...really?? huh. odd. ok.

ahhh i see, i shall get rid of hypersensitivity, had an idea of how it would be connected, but its to far off.

Yes, and no. Bia the goddess can quite literally exude force, this causes material, living or not to bend to her will. einua has some semblance of this. nary not as strong as bia's

can i have a crow? ravens are exotic?? we have them everywhere down here.

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Re: Einua, Son of Bia.

Post by EinuaDarling on 7/11/2017, 7:11 pm

((Edited))

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Re: Einua, Son of Bia.

Post by Morgan Landry on 7/12/2017, 1:24 am

Schizophrenia is a mental disorder, not a personality flaw on the same level as arrogance or laziness or gluttony.

On here, exotic pets are pets that are either wild animals (wolves, bears, pumas), mythological animals (pegasi, griffins, hydras), or animals that you cannot legally keep in the US. Ravens fall under that last category.

Im still iffy about that first ability tbh. It seems a bit of a stretch.
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Re: Einua, Son of Bia.

Post by EinuaDarling on 7/12/2017, 2:23 am

I got rid of the first ability.

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Post by EinuaDarling on 7/12/2017, 1:49 pm

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Re: Einua, Son of Bia.

Post by Kendall on 7/12/2017, 2:47 pm

Please don't double-post; if you need to add anything to your last response (if nobody has yet replied) just edit it.

Gonna say no to the crow too -- most migratory birds are illegal to own in the USA, so you need to have an exotic pet slot to own one.

Powers:
- Bump up all his cooldown times by at least 3 posts for each stage of the first power.
- You're gonna need to tone down the second power by a lot. The force clap shouldn't have a mile range, and the stomp breaking anything weaker than steel is too much.
- Increase the cooldown for the second power.
- Up to how far can he be from something in order to use the third power on it?
- Define "minimal/medium/high" densities too.
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Re: Einua, Son of Bia.

Post by EinuaDarling on 7/12/2017, 3:15 pm

crows to? hhhh thats sad. and 3 posts?? and he has to be at a minimal fifty feet from the object to use the power on the object, after that, it depends on what is said in what i put on the power itself. oh Fiddlesticks. damn, yeah, steel takes 40,000 pounds to break.....damn. Ill add the definitions of what minimum density and such forth on the power list. ((OK i edited it all((

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Post by Kendall on 7/12/2017, 6:01 pm

Powers:
- "he has to be at a minimal fifty feet from the object to use the power on the object" --> Minimal? Or do you mean maximum?
- Put in a per-topic limit for at least the last stage of the first power (ex: you can only use it once a topic).
- Reduce the range of the force clap a bit -- maybe to around 70-80 ft.
- For the yell: If something is farther away from him, would they be pushed back less? (Ex: Person 1 is 15 feet away and Person 2 is 35 ft. Would P2 be pushed back less than P1?)
- (Also for consistency, add in units for the last power. Who knows if you're talking picograms or tons there.)
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Post by EinuaDarling on 7/12/2017, 6:41 pm

maximum, ill fix that.
Person 1 is 15 feet away and Person 2 is 35 ft. Would P2 be pushed back less than P1?) p2 would be pushed less then p1. if that answers your question, anything else?

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